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Fiction 55: Freedom

Fiction 55 is a form of writing where the whole story has to fit in 55 words.

Today, I would finally be released from captivity.

Although it’s been just five days, it feels like ages.

Even though this relief isn’t for too long, it’s still worth it.

After all, I would get to see my wife and kids after five days.

“Hey dude!” said a voice behind me. “Have a happy weekend!”


P.S. I am sure I saw my fellow I.T. folks smiling at this one.

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12 Responses to "Fiction 55: Freedom"

  1. ayan says:

    I know it’s called weekend ………… but probably we should start calling in tortureend an reliefbegins

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      hehehe yeah dude.. its sure should be renamed… “end to the torture!” 😛

  2. Debosmita says:

    Its sometimes true for lawyers also 😉 especially if there is a deadline for a transaction or an urgent matter…

    I am yet to do a all-nighter in office and I dread the day(night) I would have to!

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      hehehe… i really really hope that day(night) never comes buddy… been thru it so I know how it is!!! lol

  3. Manna says:

    Aww, this is so cute.. 🙂

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      hehe thanks Manna. 🙂

  4. Shilpa Garg says:

    Good one!! 🙂
    Now-a-days this is true for all professionals and for some people even the weekends are working days.

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      yeah I agree… tomorrow, even though it’s the independence day, some of my colleagues have to report… can u believe that! and yes, I agree its not limited to just the IT guys anymore. Thanks for the comments Shillpa. 🙂

      1. Prayag Rao says:

        hey tavish!
        i really liked your blog!!!
        well done! 🙂 🙂

        1. Tavish Chadha says:

          Thanks Prayag. 🙂

  5. Shahid says:

    Well i guess we are independent for two days a week hain na….btw waiting for ur independence day post..
    I was off blogging for a while as you would have noticed( my net connection was at fault)…i think i can start blogging regularly from now on….anyways…nice look to the blog…i like it!!

  6. Shail says:

    That’s an accurate account in 55 words.

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