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My first composition – The face that I once knew
Hi Guys,
This is my first composition. Its a composition for the poem The face that I once knew. The lyrics have been modified a little bit. You can find them below the video. Please do leave a comment and let know how u find it (good or bad).
I saw someone today who looked just like you
Was it my imagination or was that really you?
It can’t be, I hope it’s not
It’s not the face that I once knew
I feel breathless, my heart is beating hard
You seemed so near and yet so far
What are these feelings, I have no clue
I just sit here and wonder, was this the face that Ionce knew?
I can’t help but go down the lane
Where we held hands and felt the pain
When there were just us, just me and you
Now there’s nothing else but the face that I onceknew
You means nothing to me, i kept telling myself
Then why do i keep looking for you everywhere I go
Your still stuck to my heart with glue
I can’t lie, I still love with the face that I onceknew
Hope you guys liked it.
Cheers!
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Nice man…u play the guitar well!!!
kyaa baat kya baaat kyaa baat
maannn… u can play the guitaaar….
sheeeshh.. ab tho mujhe lagta hai im nothin
oi lekin clarity nai hai awaaz mein
bada blurry blurry lg raha hai
hey its rocking..
keep it up
i loved it..
hey nice one double champ.. really delightful
I like…I like..
Oh n its Diana by the way…!!!
Its nice.. Its nice to hear.. Good job man!!
wooooooooooow loved it .. A chapa rustam.. you are talented I must say. keep going all the very best.
good stuff keep it up
cool stuff buddy! When i was kid i joined a guitar class but never learned *sighs*
boss tussi to chhaa gaye! beste!
Hey that was really good!
I always loved this poem!
And now a song!
Good! Really very good!
KUDOS!
Shahid
Thanks buddy… am still quite amateur. But am glad u liked it.
cutedevilmeg
Oye dont say u r nothing. I wish I could come up the kind or poetry u write… clarity ka toh I know… its the best i could get… phone ke cam se liya hai ye video… will take a better one when i have a good cam and put it up again… Thanks allot for the feedback!
Deepa
Thanks Deepa. Am glad u like it.
Vipul
Thank you marshal saab. Am glad u liked it.
Diana
Thanks Diana! I am glad u "like it".
Aaratrika
Thanks buddy. Am glad u liked it. Welcome to Sensible Bakwas
tikulicious
Thanks allot Tikuli. That was pretty flattering!
Gyanban
Thanks allot buddy.
LR
Thanks buddy! I joined guitar classes twice when I was a kid. Both the times my tutor left the country. Now am not sure if thats a coincidence. hehe
Anyways I started learning again a year and a half back. But still a long way to go.
Saurabh
Shukria janab shukriya!
Archana
Thanks allot buddy. that was flattering…
really nice.. well done!
keep working..!
You score on three counts… your voice your guitar and your composition… well done !!
You are Amazing! And this composition just makes your heart shine! BEautiful cause you are Be-YOU-Tiful
Creativity personified!
Keep up the great work. Imagine it sounds so good now…if it was an actual recording studio…you would sound like a veteran singer-songwriter.
Much Love,
Z~
JS
Thank you buddy… and welcome to Sensible Bakwas.
Abha
Thanks Abha for the appreciations. Am really glad u liked all three
Zeenat
Wow! That comment was really flattering! Thanks a ton Zeenat!
Awesome composition indeed! Brilliant rendition of voice, music and note!
Keep @ it and rock on….. for passion is the only thing that one can live a life for, if you know what I mean!
Cheers!
as they say in pujabi CHAKK TE FATTE… Excellent .. now i jsut need to get hold of you .. get a autograph or something .. once you hit that high.. you will forget us he he hee
ALL THE BEST .. and good work keep it up
Rakesh
I know what you mean bro… yes passion is what we should all live for… thanks for your lovely comments!!
Bikramjit Singh Mann
wow! wow! wow! an autograph? ye kuch zada hogaya yaar… music and poetry are huge passions… i dont know where ill reach… but i will never never forget my buddies for sure hehehe… thanks allot bro – for ur lovely comments and am glad u liked it..
hey excellent loved hearing this new sensation in the blog world…nice talent u have..keep it up/////hey tv pe new reality show hone wala hia..india's got talent…go in that….make ur talent known to the whole world..all the best…
chelooo kuch tho kaam karra thu….!
oh beta……… you have really impressed me today…. and u know what… the poems sound so different when u sang.. it just sounded "complete"
well done, dude… m a big fan of yours now…
hi !
tavish……….you have a clean voice. Just take care in recording.
Dr. K. v. ramana murthy
Rohini
Hey thanks for that aweosme comment… am on cloud 999 after reading that… but itna bhi talent nahi hai yaar.. .I havent trained in music else would have given it a shot…. but ya i really wish I was… thank u so much anyway ke apne hamein is kabil samjha.
Archana
hehehe a comment just as I expected.
Chanz
Thanks allot buddy… am flattered…big time!!
hey nice poem!!!
Dr. Ramana
Yes I know the recording hasnt come out well. It was taken from my phone… so… anyways am glad u liked it.
Siddesh
Thanks buddy.
hi buddy ..
Embrace it @ http://maheshisms.blogspot.com/p/awards.html
Mahesh
Thanks buddy… left my comments there
Very nice Tavish
You are very talented indeed
b>CB/b>
Thanks allot buddy!
tavish singh Sings! tavish singh writes ! tavish singh plays da guitar!n dis video shows u r very good doing all 3 of dem….realisation just dawned on me dat u indeed r very talented..gr8 job tavish! dont lose da spark!
Anonymous
Hey, thank you so much! That was very flattering!
TAVISH! This made me your FAN! You're a powerhouse of talent! That's some talent now! You write, you're a guitarist and you sing well too! Woah! Are there more hidden talents?
As for this one, it is SUPERB!
Raksha
Raksha, am flattered. Well, music is another passion apart from writing. As for my other talents, i am still digging into myself. You guys will get to know when I do sind out something.
amazing, amazing, absolutely amazing! (sorry for the sheer lack of other adjectives but seriously, i LOVE the lyrics and the composition as a whole)
Mehak
Thanks allot Mehak… that was really sweet of u… glad u liked it..
Wow! you can sing so well and have composed it, too. Do upload more, would love to hear them.
Shas
Thanks allot buddy… will do so once i have a nice composition ready…. thank u so much for ur comments… much appreciated!
Loved the lyrics …. and you play lovely,,, uff abhi i too feel like at least to learn saregamapa
well, I am still no where close to being ok at the guitar… manged to get this one right, long way to go before I can actually call myself a guitarist.. am glad u liked the lyrics.. thank u very much!!
Dude you’re good! But your lyrics don’t seem to flow at times. oh well that could very well be just me. :S Considering this was your first attempt, you did great.
Cheers
Thanks Usha… well I would agree with u coz the recording was done using a phone cam… am plannign to get it recorded in a proper studio… will post it once I have done so
great composition man! i loved the lyrics
Thanks buddy! I am glad u liked it
dear tavish
akal bhe ,shakal bhe !aur ab aawaz bhe!kya baat hai my bro is peerrrrffffect! keep up the good work.God bless u.ALWAYS!!!!!!1
gonu didi
hehe thanks for the flattering praise didi… perfect toh nahi hoon but am working towards that hehe