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My first composition – The face that I once knew

Hi Guys,


This is my first composition. Its a composition for the poem The face that I once knew. The lyrics have been modified  a little bit. You can find them below the video. Please do leave a comment and let know how u find it (good or bad).

I saw someone today who looked just like you
Was it my imagination or was that really you?
It can’t be, I hope it’s not
It’s not the face that I once knew

I feel breathless, my heart is beating hard
You seemed so near and yet so far
What are these feelings, I have no clue
I just sit here and wonder, was this the face that Ionce knew?


I can’t help but go down the lane
Where we held hands and felt the pain
When there were just us, just me and you
Now there’s nothing else but the face that I onceknew

You means nothing to me, i kept telling myself
Then why do i keep looking for you everywhere I go
Your still stuck to my heart with glue
I can’t lie, I still love with the face that I onceknew

Hope you guys liked it.

Cheers!

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Tavish is the administrator and founder of Sensible Bakwas. He is a software engineer by profession and a writer by passion. In case you want to get in touch with him, he is an email away at tavish.chadha@gmail.com. Hope you enjoy your time here. Do leave your feedback in the comment section here.

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62 Responses to "My first composition – The face that I once knew"

  1. Shahid says:

    Nice man…u play the guitar well!!!

  2. cutedevilmeg says:

    kyaa baat kya baaat kyaa baat
    maannn… u can play the guitaaar…. :D
    sheeeshh.. ab tho mujhe lagta hai im nothin :(
    oi lekin clarity nai hai awaaz mein :(
    bada blurry blurry lg raha hai :(

  3. deepa kashyap says:

    hey its rocking..
    keep it up :) :)
    i loved it..

  4. Vipul Grover says:

    hey nice one double champ.. really delightful :)

  5. DJ says:

    I like…I like.. :) Oh n its Diana by the way…!!!

  6. Aaratrika says:

    Its nice.. Its nice to hear.. Good job man!!

  7. tikulicious says:

    wooooooooooow loved it .. A chapa rustam.. you are talented I must say. keep going all the very best.

  8. Gyanban says:

    good stuff keep it up

  9. Lakshmi Rajan says:

    cool stuff buddy! When i was kid i joined a guitar class but never learned *sighs*

  10. Saurabh Panshikar says:

    boss tussi to chhaa gaye! beste!

  11. Yemiledu says:

    Hey that was really good!
    I always loved this poem!
    And now a song!
    Good! Really very good!
    KUDOS!

  12. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) says:

    Shahid
    Thanks buddy… am still quite amateur. But am glad u liked it. :D

  13. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) says:

    cutedevilmeg
    Oye dont say u r nothing. I wish I could come up the kind or poetry u write… clarity ka toh I know… its the best i could get… phone ke cam se liya hai ye video… will take a better one when i have a good cam and put it up again… Thanks allot for the feedback! :)

  14. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) says:

    Deepa
    Thanks Deepa. Am glad u like it. :)

  15. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) says:

    Vipul
    Thank you marshal saab. Am glad u liked it. :)

  16. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) says:

    Diana
    Thanks Diana! I am glad u "like it". :D

  17. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) says:

    Aaratrika
    Thanks buddy. Am glad u liked it. Welcome to Sensible Bakwas

  18. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) says:

    tikulicious
    Thanks allot Tikuli. That was pretty flattering!

  19. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) says:

    Gyanban
    Thanks allot buddy. :)

  20. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) says:

    LR
    Thanks buddy! I joined guitar classes twice when I was a kid. Both the times my tutor left the country. Now am not sure if thats a coincidence. hehe
    Anyways I started learning again a year and a half back. But still a long way to go. :)

  21. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) says:

    Saurabh
    Shukria janab shukriya! :D

  22. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) says:

    Archana
    Thanks allot buddy. that was flattering… :)

  23. J.S. says:

    really nice.. well done!
    keep working..!

  24. Abha Midha says:

    You score on three counts… your voice your guitar and your composition… well done !!

  25. Zeenat{Positive Provocations} says:

    You are Amazing! And this composition just makes your heart shine! BEautiful cause you are Be-YOU-Tiful :)
    Creativity personified!
    Keep up the great work. Imagine it sounds so good now…if it was an actual recording studio…you would sound like a veteran singer-songwriter.
    Much Love,
    Z~

  26. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) says:

    JS
    Thank you buddy… and welcome to Sensible Bakwas. :)

  27. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) says:

    Abha
    Thanks Abha for the appreciations. Am really glad u liked all three :D

  28. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) says:

    Zeenat
    Wow! That comment was really flattering! Thanks a ton Zeenat! :D

  29. V Rakesh says:

    Awesome composition indeed! Brilliant rendition of voice, music and note!

    Keep @ it and rock on….. for passion is the only thing that one can live a life for, if you know what I mean!

    Cheers!

  30. Bikramjit Singh Mann says:

    as they say in pujabi CHAKK TE FATTE… Excellent .. now i jsut need to get hold of you .. get a autograph or something .. once you hit that high.. you will forget us he he hee
    ALL THE BEST .. and good work keep it up :)

  31. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) says:

    Rakesh

    I know what you mean bro… yes passion is what we should all live for… thanks for your lovely comments!! :)

  32. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) says:

    Bikramjit Singh Mann
    wow! wow! wow! an autograph? ye kuch zada hogaya yaar… music and poetry are huge passions… i dont know where ill reach… but i will never never forget my buddies for sure hehehe… thanks allot bro – for ur lovely comments and am glad u liked it.. :)

  33. rohini says:

    hey excellent loved hearing this new sensation in the blog world…nice talent u have..keep it up/////hey tv pe new reality show hone wala hia..india's got talent…go in that….make ur talent known to the whole world..all the best…

  34. Archana says:

    chelooo kuch tho kaam karra thu….! :P

  35. Chanz says:

    oh beta……… you have really impressed me today…. and u know what… the poems sound so different when u sang.. it just sounded "complete"

    well done, dude… m a big fan of yours now…

  36. ramyam ....ramaneyam says:

    hi !
    tavish……….you have a clean voice. Just take care in recording.
    Dr. K. v. ramana murthy

  37. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) says:

    Rohini
    Hey thanks for that aweosme comment… am on cloud 999 after reading that… but itna bhi talent nahi hai yaar.. .I havent trained in music else would have given it a shot…. but ya i really wish I was… thank u so much anyway ke apne hamein is kabil samjha. :)

  38. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) says:

    Archana
    hehehe a comment just as I expected. :P

  39. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) says:

    Chanz
    Thanks allot buddy… am flattered…big time!! :D

  40. Siddhesh 'Ravan' Kabe says:

    hey nice poem!!!

  41. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) says:

    Dr. Ramana
    Yes I know the recording hasnt come out well. It was taken from my phone… so… anyways am glad u liked it. :)

  42. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) says:

    Siddesh
    Thanks buddy. :)

  43. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) says:

    Mahesh
    Thanks buddy… left my comments there :)

  44. Chatterbox says:

    Very nice Tavish :D
    You are very talented indeed :D :D

  45. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) says:

    b>CB/b>
    Thanks allot buddy! :D

  46. Anonymous says:

    tavish singh Sings! tavish singh writes ! tavish singh plays da guitar!n dis video shows u r very good doing all 3 of dem….realisation just dawned on me dat u indeed r very talented..gr8 job tavish! dont lose da spark!

  47. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) says:

    Anonymous
    Hey, thank you so much! That was very flattering! :D

  48. Raksha Raman says:

    TAVISH! This made me your FAN! You're a powerhouse of talent! That's some talent now! You write, you're a guitarist and you sing well too! Woah! Are there more hidden talents?

    As for this one, it is SUPERB! :)

  49. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) says:

    Raksha
    Raksha, am flattered. Well, music is another passion apart from writing. As for my other talents, i am still digging into myself. You guys will get to know when I do sind out something. :)

  50. Mehak says:

    amazing, amazing, absolutely amazing! (sorry for the sheer lack of other adjectives but seriously, i LOVE the lyrics and the composition as a whole)

  51. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) says:

    Mehak
    Thanks allot Mehak… that was really sweet of u… glad u liked it.. :)

  52. Shas says:

    Wow! you can sing so well and have composed it, too. Do upload more, would love to hear them.

  53. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) says:

    Shas
    Thanks allot buddy… will do so once i have a nice composition ready…. thank u so much for ur comments… much appreciated! :)

  54. Anuradha says:

    Loved the lyrics …. and you play lovely,,, uff abhi i too feel like at least to learn saregamapa :P

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      well, I am still no where close to being ok at the guitar… manged to get this one right, long way to go before I can actually call myself a guitarist.. am glad u liked the lyrics.. thank u very much!! :)

  55. Usha says:

    Dude you’re good! But your lyrics don’t seem to flow at times. oh well that could very well be just me. :S Considering this was your first attempt, you did great. :)

    Cheers

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      Thanks Usha… well I would agree with u coz the recording was done using a phone cam… am plannign to get it recorded in a proper studio… will post it once I have done so :)

  56. DuDO says:

    great composition man! i loved the lyrics

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      Thanks buddy! I am glad u liked it :)

  57. ganiv says:

    dear tavish
    akal bhe ,shakal bhe !aur ab aawaz bhe!kya baat hai my bro is peerrrrffffect! keep up the good work.God bless u.ALWAYS!!!!!!1
    gonu didi

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      hehe thanks for the flattering praise didi… perfect toh nahi hoon but am working towards that hehe :P

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