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Fiction 77: Race against time

Fiction 77 is a piece of fiction written in a maximum of 77 words

“Up the staircase, through the corridor – you’ll find what you’re looking for”

Hearing this, his eyes lit up. He rushed through the hall, pushing the people aside.

It was a race against time; it was a question of life and death for him.

He was delighted at was he saw as he threw open the door.

Ten minutes later

“Honey, is everything alright?”

“No, it’s not. You were right; I shouldn’t have overeaten last night.”

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14 Responses to "Fiction 77: Race against time"

  1. Leo says:

    I liked the tension to this.. and the twist as well.. though I couldn’t follow the twist at first :)
    good one..

    PS: m now subscribed to ur feed..!

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      hehe… i did try and make the ‘twist’ as a obvious a possible… i guess kuch zada hi hogaya :)
      anyways am glad u liked it… thanks for your comments and taks a ton for subscribing!! :)

  2. Shahid says:

    Hehehe…..more than one apple a day and u will see the second one the next day….u know what i mean

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      hehehe I know what u mean… ;)

  3. Chanz says:

    Lol… I thought its going to revolve around some serious issue. I wasn’t wrong. It indeed was a life and death situation.

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      yeah! It is a VERY serious issue my friend… VERY VERY serious!!! hehehe

  4. Megz says:

    ROFL :lol: :lol
    i hope ab uska pet saaf hai :P
    nai toh kayam churan ya fir pudin hara ya fir gelusil de do :P
    shayad teek ho jaaye :P

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      hehehe haan haan usne le liya hai woh sab ab aal iz well ;)

  5. Chandu says:

    abey..ur really at marketing….try u r hand in that field!!

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      hehe thanks man… but u got that from this post?

  6. Pavan says:

    Had a first glance in a hurry..did not get it…read it again and couldnt stop ROFLING…:D…
    Better quit ur job yar..wanna see Chadaji as a gud writer…Al the bst…

    paWan

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      hehehe thanks allot man… well, hopefully one day you will see me as one… :)

  7. :):)

    That was nice tavish.
    the way you handled the race.
    If I had written this piece, I would have added a sigh after her response :):)

  8. Tavish Chadha says:

    hehe… well, i just wanted to make it a little more challenging for the reader to understand the dramatic ending. :)

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