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Fiction 55: I do…
Fiction 55 is a form of writing where the whole story has to fit in 55 words.
I was there and so was she. We looked at each other and our eyes met. I saw my future in them.
A man next to her asked me “So young man, do you?”
“Yes, I do.”, I replied. She smiled at me and said, “Your offer letter would reach you in a week. Congratulations!”
Written by Tavish Chadha
Tavish is the administrator and founder of Sensible Bakwas. He is a software engineer by profession and a writer by passion. In case you want to get in touch with him, he is an email away at tavish.chadha@gmail.com. Hope you enjoy your time here. Do leave your feedback in the comment section here.
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Nice, interesting last sentence
Wow….superb 55ier.
met every parameter of a 55ier…
one of the best 55iers i have read in recent times…
the plot and the twist….loved it buddy:)
Phoenixritu
Hey thanks!
Mahesh
wow! that was flattering! thanks buddy!
hey thanks Avada!
nice one Tavish
Nice one
oh so sweet….i regard it sweet coz i liked the smooth twist at the end..it was really nice…
Neha
Thanks Neha
Smitha
Thanks!
Rohini
hey thanks Rohini… those were very kind words…
Loved it !
typo in the young man line
Kavita
Thanks! A very warm welcome to Sensible bakwas!
Saurabh
aah thanks for pointing that out… have made the required changes
aaww…le masttt
poora shaadi ka effect maara hai
fataaannggg post re..
me the likes me the likes..
oieeeee mela wala 55 bi padhoooo
Kewl!
I liked it. 
megs
hehe haan poora shadi ka effect banake rakha tha maine…. thanks re… tera padha tha maine.. have to comment there
Nethra
glad u liked it
Too good!! And congrats on winning BATOM March & April.
Good Luck…hope u make a hatrick this time
Viyoma
hey thanks Viyoma! Well, there r some amazing writeups this time for BAT… am not sure if I stand a chance… anyways thanks allot for the wishes…
btw a very warm welcome to Sensible Bakwas
are you kidding me..?? I mean, do u say "I do" when it comes to a job… lol..
i love twists and turns…
Chanz
well, HR round mein unki baat manni padti hai… so u do have to say a lot of "I do"s….
Thanks buddy… glad u liked it