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Fiction 55: I do…

Fiction 55 is a form of writing where the whole story has to fit in 55 words.

I was there and so was she. We looked at each other and our eyes met. I saw my future in them.
A man next to her asked me “So young man, do you?”
“Yes, I do.”, I replied. She smiled at me and said, “Your offer letter would reach you in a week. Congratulations!”

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Tavish is the administrator and founder of Sensible Bakwas. He is a software engineer by profession and a writer by passion. In case you want to get in touch with him, he is an email away at tavish.chadha@gmail.com. Hope you enjoy your time here. Do leave your feedback in the comment section here.

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24 Responses to "Fiction 55: I do…"

  1. Phoenixritu says:

    Nice, interesting last sentence

  2. Mahesh Kalaal says:

    Wow….superb 55ier.
    met every parameter of a 55ier…
    one of the best 55iers i have read in recent times…
    the plot and the twist….loved it buddy:)

  3. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) says:

    Phoenixritu
    Hey thanks! :)

  4. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) says:

    Mahesh
    wow! that was flattering! thanks buddy!

  5. evanescentthoughts says:

    :)) good one

  6. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) says:

    hey thanks Avada! :)

  7. Neha says:

    nice one Tavish :)

  8. Smitha says:

    Nice one :)

  9. rohini says:

    oh so sweet….i regard it sweet coz i liked the smooth twist at the end..it was really nice…

  10. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) says:

    Neha
    Thanks Neha :)

  11. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) says:

    Smitha
    Thanks!

  12. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) says:

    Rohini
    hey thanks Rohini… those were very kind words… :)

  13. kavita says:

    Loved it !

  14. Saurabh Panshikar says:

    typo in the young man line

  15. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) says:

    Kavita
    Thanks! A very warm welcome to Sensible bakwas! :)

  16. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) says:

    Saurabh
    aah thanks for pointing that out… have made the required changes :)

  17. megzone says:

    aaww…le masttt :D
    poora shaadi ka effect maara hai :D
    fataaannggg post re.. :D
    me the likes me the likes..
    oieeeee mela wala 55 bi padhoooo

  18. Nethra says:

    Kewl! :D I liked it. :)

  19. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) says:

    megs
    hehe haan poora shadi ka effect banake rakha tha maine…. thanks re… tera padha tha maine.. have to comment there :)

  20. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) says:

    Nethra
    glad u liked it :)

  21. Viyoma says:

    Too good!! And congrats on winning BATOM March & April.
    Good Luck…hope u make a hatrick this time :)

  22. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) says:

    Viyoma
    hey thanks Viyoma! Well, there r some amazing writeups this time for BAT… am not sure if I stand a chance… anyways thanks allot for the wishes… :)

    btw a very warm welcome to Sensible Bakwas :)

  23. Chanz says:

    are you kidding me..?? I mean, do u say "I do" when it comes to a job… lol..

    i love twists and turns… :D

  24. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) says:

    Chanz
    well, HR round mein unki baat manni padti hai… so u do have to say a lot of "I do"s…. :P

    Thanks buddy… glad u liked it :)

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