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Life aint a morning walk

The following lines are dedicated to all those people who felt I couldn’t get anywhere in life and tried pretty hard to convince me about it too. Today, I really want to thank them for all that they have done. If it wasn’t for them I wouldn’t be  what I am today.

Life aint a morning walk

It’s a god damn race

And I am gonna win it

Whatever it takes

You may think I am bad,

Not good enough

But sorry my friend

I can be really tough

Discourage me, taunt me

Do whatever you like

If you think that’s gonna stop me

You can go take a hike

Life aint a bed of roses

It’s a two sided sword

I’ll walk it, I know I’ll bleed

Eventually I know, I will succeed

Challenge me, scare me,

Do whatever you like

If you think that’s gonna stop me

You can go take a hike

Life aint a playground

It’s a god damn war zone

Fight me or make me fall

But in the end, I’ll stand tall

Discourage me, taunt me

Do whatever you like

If you think that’s gonna stop me

You can go take a hike

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Hope you guys liked it. I’ll be back with more soon.

Till then, keep smiling! :)

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Tavish is the administrator and founder of Sensible Bakwas. He is a software engineer by profession and a writer by passion. In case you want to get in touch with him, he is an email away at tavish.chadha@gmail.com. Hope you enjoy your time here. Do leave your feedback in the comment section here.

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34 Responses to "Life aint a morning walk"

  1. Gauri Joshi says:

    good one Tavish!!!

    Reallly proud of u:))

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      Thanks Gauri. :)

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      Danke! :D

  2. Karthik says:

    Splendid, man. Very motivating indeed. Although I remember reading a prose version of it on your blog once. That too was fantastic. Keep ‘em coming. :)

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      I didn’t write a prose version of this yet. But yeah, i do write about stuff like this so must be something similar. I had actually started this a long time back. I just completed it today. :)

      1. Karthik says:

        Not exactly a prose version, but the subject matter was quite similar. Something in the format of a story, perhaps. :)

        1. Tavish Chadha says:

          hmm probably… thanks for coming again! :)

  3. najeeb says:

    abba abbaa abababababaa… im inspired :) good one Mr. Lekhak or rather Mr. Kavi

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      OMG! Look who I inspired! lolz
      Thanks bro… thanks allot! :)

  4. Rumya says:

    Great poem Tavish!! :D
    It gives out a sort of irresistible impulse and encouragement to strive harder.
    Makes for an excellent read at the start of each day :)

    Especially loved the refrain,
    “Do whatever you like
    If you think that’s gonna stop me
    You can go take a hike”

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      Hey Rumya thanks alot. Chalo so I have blog visit every morning from u now! hehe :P

  5. Rajlakshmi says:

    thats a brilliant write…
    inspiring and motivating… life is lost if one stops trying.

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      Thanks Rajlakshmi… thats so true… life def stops when one gives up himself. :)

  6. Abha Midha says:

    A gr8 motivating poem!

    And congrats for proving all your detractors wrong. Luv your optimism. :)

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      :D Thanks Abha! :D

  7. biswajit says:

    It’s cool buddy, good one

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      Thanks buddy. :)

  8. Debosmita says:

    Its one inspiring verse
    With a dose of words terse
    It describes you well
    And motivates all
    To challenge life’s downs
    And change them to crowns

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      ha ha thats a nice poetic comment… thanks for that! :)

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      :)

  9. Raj says:

    Super liketh !

  10. Life s really ain’t Simple…your words have given it a true meaning :)

    P.S.and your Bakwas is really SENSIBLE…would love to read more of it ;)

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      Thank u so much Poonam… am really glad u liked it…

      well the idea of the blog was to prove to the world that bakwas can make sense too ;)

  11. Shahid says:

    Awesome man….I love the fact that you keep pushing yourself…we all need to do it..respect Tavish, respect

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      Thanks Shahid… yes, its about never giving up…. :)

  12. mayur says:

    mast likha hai bhai!…..lekin kispe khunnas nikaal raha hai? ;)

    btw, I believe that if u treat life as a race….u will always be doing catch up with something or someone…..but if u do things ur way….u ll soon realize that u r leading the pack :)

    Keep writing! :)

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      hehehe yaar had written this a year and a half ago… tab un sab pe khunnas nikhal raha tha jisne ye kaha ke I am good for nothing…

      and I agree with what you said 100%. Thanks for ur comments :)

  13. Kshitij says:

    hmmmm… toh je baat hai.
    good good.

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      Thanks. :)

  14. Anuradha says:

    Simply beautiful :) Loved every bit of it…:)

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      Thanks allot Anu!! :)

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