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Ek Pari

ankhien uski, na kehke bhi
bohot kuch keh gayi
chamak aisi, jaise sitaron se ubhri
dil ke samdar mein doob gayi

bohot kuch keh gayi
ye hawaien mujhse
Kaanon mien mere ghul gayi
mithi si sargam banke

ho gaya is dil ko kya najane
pehele toh aise na dhadka tha
shor mien bhi sannata tha chaya
ladki hi thi ya tha pari ka saya

This my first poem in hindi. Hope you guys like it. Will publish some more in the days to come. Do leave your comments and feedback.

Cheers!

Tavish

P.S. I wanted to originally put it up written in Hindi but Google Translator really sucks.

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Tavish is the administrator and founder of Sensible Bakwas. He is a software engineer by profession and a writer by passion. In case you want to get in touch with him, he is an email away at tavish.chadha@gmail.com. Hope you enjoy your time here. Do leave your feedback in the comment section here.

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20 Responses to "Ek Pari"

  1. Very well said Tavish!
    I already see you are really good hindi poet too!! I liked the poem…very sweet n so real!
    Okay more thing let me tell you i like to spell ur name like …’TaWish’
    So here I WISH you Tawish, may to excel in all aspects as U WISH :)
    Looking forward to see more of ur such creative writing in hindi too :)

    ~Keep the Spark ALive..

    1. Deepshikha Agarwal says:

      Hey Tavish…its awesome…really nice 1….gud wrk..but let me ask sumthing..was this dedicated to sum1 ;) ..dil ki gehraiyon se kissi ko bade ache se describe kiya hai aapne…kya baat hai …hehe…keep it up!!!!

      1. Tavish Chadha says:

        hehehe kisi ke liye nahi hai yaar… total imagnation se likhi hai… jis din kisi ke liye likhoonga us din blog pe nahi daaloonga seedha usko hi doonga :P

        and ya thanks for the appreciation :)

    2. Tavish Chadha says:

      Thanks allot buddy… btw y would you wanna spell my name with a w and not v?? Tavish wit the V is better than with the W!!! :P :)

  2. megz says:

    sexxxiieee…. :D
    kyaaaa massstttt likha hai yaaarrrr :d
    seeeee now u write so well in hindi also :D
    chal chal ab ek do poem aur likh daaal :D :D
    waaisseeeee :P
    was she a pari or a ahem ahem u know wat ;)

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      haan haan aur ayengi… intazar karo balike. :P
      aur haan ye kisi ke liye nahi tha… immagination naam ki bhi koi cheez hoti hai… pata hai na… :P :)

  3. Rumya says:

    LOL!! :D I was reading your poem aloud and for a minute my mother thought Sonia G was giving a speech on TV. :P :D

    Anyway, leaving my terrible Hindi aside…..it was sweet poem :) Great first time write!!
    Keep ‘em coming, Tavish!! :)

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      hehehe now I really wanna hear u recite it. :P
      Thanks allot for those flattering words. More of it is gonna come up soon! :)

  4. Manish Sharma says:

    I liked it!!!!

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      Thanks buddy! :)

  5. Ayswarya says:

    Love it!! Its nice Tavish!! It is really sweet..

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      Thanks Aysh. :)

  6. S.R.Ayyangar says:

    Good maiden attempt.

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      Thanks alot sir! I am glad you liked it. :)

  7. Awesome is the word! even if its first time :)

    and about Google Translator..I agree ;)

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      Thanks allot Poonam!! :D

      Yeah Google Translator was a real pain!!

  8. Shahid says:

    Kya baat hain Tavish…ekdum sahi wali poem hain bhai…main to kissi ladki ko sunane wala hu….dekho shayad mera mission complete ho jaye

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      ha ha ha… be my guest.. just make sure she hasnt read it before that :P

  9. Shilpa Garg says:

    Wah! Kya baat hai, Tavish!! :) Lovely expression! :)

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      Thanks Shilpa! Good to see u back here! :)

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