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Mai aur mere khwab

Zameen pe toh chalte hai sabh

Aasmano mien udna chahata hoon mai

Sitaro ko toh pana chahate hain sabh

Sitaron ke paar jana chahata hoon mai

Zinda toh hain yahan pe sabhi

Khulke jeena chahata hoon mai

Bas ek hi dua hai aye khuda

Upper jitna bhi kyun na jaoon

Ye duniya choti na dhike

Raah mien jisne chodna tha sath

Who chod gaye par apne joh hain mere

Who mere saath hi rahien

Sapne chahe choote mere

Par himmat meri toote na kabhi

Saab kuch kyun na kho doon mai

Khudko na kho doon mai kabhi

Hope you guys liked my second attempt at hindi poetry. I promise there is more to come. So stay tuned to Sensible Bakwas. As usual, don’t forget to leave your comments and feedback.

Keep smiling!

Tavish

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Tavish is the administrator and founder of Sensible Bakwas. He is a software engineer by profession and a writer by passion. In case you want to get in touch with him, he is an email away at tavish.chadha@gmail.com. Hope you enjoy your time here. Do leave your feedback in the comment section here.

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16 Responses to "Mai aur mere khwab"

  1. GREAT fan of urs!!
    Be anywhere on earth or stars…tere pichhha naa main chodugee soniye!!
    SUPER LIKE IT…
    U r becoming gulzar of wht…BUT on serious note!!
    Great move…I liked the idea n thought…could relate it n best part it is so inspiring

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      hehe na chodna mera peecha… kabhi na chodna… u really know the art of flattering na? lol
      thanks for the amazing comment… :)

  2. Rumya says:

    That was another fantastic one, Tavish!! :) Bravo!!
    My reading has greatly improved too ;)
    Love the meaning of the lines!!
    Totally agree with Rachana about the Gulzar part ;) ….aur main bhi pichha naa chodoongi…padhte rahoongi…padhte rahoongi…padhte rahoongi…aur aap likhte rehena!! :D

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      hehe thanks Rums… peecha na chodna tu bhi :P
      glad to know ur hindi is improving.. but yaar ek demo toh cahiye :P

  3. Dreams…never big or small…its just the faith in them…and ones effort to make them real…till then continue Dreaming :)
    and you are improving with each attempt ;) I appreciate that!

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      Thanks Poonam! :)

      1. Beyond Horizon says:

        Hey I know you are flattered with all the appreciation as you forgot ‘m’ in my name!
        :)

        1. Tavish Chadha says:

          ooops sorry about that… its been corrected! :)

  4. S.R.Ayyangar says:

    Aaise hi udate raho khule aasman mein
    pankh tute na kabhi.

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      dhanyawaad sir dhanyawaad! :)

  5. Navjot says:

    I liked ” Sapne chahe choote mere, Par himmat meri toote na kabhi”
    Some are afraid of dreaming, others of failure to achieve their dreams, but if we have the himmat not to quit, dreams can be resurrected or even made bigger. Great! keep it up!

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      Thanks dad! :)

  6. mayur says:

    tathaastu!

    aapki sabhi manokaamnaye poori ho :)

    I especially like the last 2 lines
    “Saab kuch kyun na kho doon mai,
    Khudko na kho doon mai kabhi”

    There is no greater loss than loosing urself!

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      :D Thanks Mayur! Yeah, I agree, sab kuch lut jaye par khud ko kabhi na khona chahiye :)

  7. Megz says:

    naaiiiiceeeeeee…….. :D :D
    himmat nahi kabhi haarna tum
    jitne chahe aage badh lena tum
    saath rahenge tumhare hamesha
    bhale fir haath chahe chod dena tum :P :P

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      :) thanks hai :) loved the last 2 lines :)

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