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Mai aur mere khwab
Zameen pe toh chalte hai sabh
Aasmano mien udna chahata hoon mai
Sitaro ko toh pana chahate hain sabh
Sitaron ke paar jana chahata hoon mai
Zinda toh hain yahan pe sabhi
Khulke jeena chahata hoon mai
Bas ek hi dua hai aye khuda
Upper jitna bhi kyun na jaoon
Ye duniya choti na dhike
Raah mien jisne chodna tha sath
Who chod gaye par apne joh hain mere
Who mere saath hi rahien
Sapne chahe choote mere
Par himmat meri toote na kabhi
Saab kuch kyun na kho doon mai
Khudko na kho doon mai kabhi
Hope you guys liked my second attempt at hindi poetry. I promise there is more to come. So stay tuned to Sensible Bakwas. As usual, don’t forget to leave your comments and feedback.
Keep smiling!
Tavish
Written by Tavish Chadha
Tavish is the administrator and founder of Sensible Bakwas. He is a software engineer by profession and a writer by passion. In case you want to get in touch with him, he is an email away at tavish.chadha@gmail.com. Hope you enjoy your time here. Do leave your feedback in the comment section here.
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Be anywhere on earth or stars…tere pichhha naa main chodugee soniye!!
SUPER LIKE IT…
U r becoming gulzar of wht…BUT on serious note!!
Great move…I liked the idea n thought…could relate it n best part it is so inspiring
hehe na chodna mera peecha… kabhi na chodna… u really know the art of flattering na? lol
thanks for the amazing comment…
That was another fantastic one, Tavish!!
Bravo!!
….aur main bhi pichha naa chodoongi…padhte rahoongi…padhte rahoongi…padhte rahoongi…aur aap likhte rehena!! 
My reading has greatly improved too
Love the meaning of the lines!!
Totally agree with Rachana about the Gulzar part
hehe thanks Rums… peecha na chodna tu bhi
glad to know ur hindi is improving.. but yaar ek demo toh cahiye
Dreams…never big or small…its just the faith in them…and ones effort to make them real…till then continue Dreaming
I appreciate that!
and you are improving with each attempt
Thanks Poonam!
Hey I know you are flattered with all the appreciation as you forgot ‘m’ in my name!
ooops sorry about that… its been corrected!
Aaise hi udate raho khule aasman mein
pankh tute na kabhi.
dhanyawaad sir dhanyawaad!
I liked ” Sapne chahe choote mere, Par himmat meri toote na kabhi”
Some are afraid of dreaming, others of failure to achieve their dreams, but if we have the himmat not to quit, dreams can be resurrected or even made bigger. Great! keep it up!
Thanks dad!
tathaastu!
aapki sabhi manokaamnaye poori ho
I especially like the last 2 lines
“Saab kuch kyun na kho doon mai,
Khudko na kho doon mai kabhi”
There is no greater loss than loosing urself!
naaiiiiceeeeeee……..
himmat nahi kabhi haarna tum
jitne chahe aage badh lena tum
saath rahenge tumhare hamesha
bhale fir haath chahe chod dena tum