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“Words are all I have, to take your heart away.” he once sang expressing his feelings for the girl he loved. Although the words failed to strike the strings of her heart, he made it a way of life. But he soon found himself chained to the walls his past failures had built around him.


“Enough is enough. How long are you going to hold yourself back? How long are you going to stop those words that are dying to break free?” he said to himself, determined to break free from the clutches of the past and express himself in the way he knew best – through his words.


The spirits were high but the battered spirit needed help and an old bald friend came to the rescue. “Don’t worry my friend, I know exactly what you need.” He said handing him a cup of steaming hot ginger tea and the smiling days were back with a set of three fiction fifty-fivers.

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15 Responses to "Rebirth"

  1. Rumya says:

    LOL!! 😀
    You are a Dream Scream and I am still ROTFL-ing!! Where do you get these ideas??
    Enjoyed it throughly!! 🙂 Great sense of humor Tavish!! 😉
    First fun 55er I’ve read at GC… and it suits you fine!! 🙂

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      hehe these ideas just come Rums.. they just come 😛
      Thanks allot for those flattering words 🙂


  2. Sree says:

    Haha…LR would be a proud man! 😉 Nice one….ATB my friend! 🙂

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      Thanks bro! ATB to u too! 🙂

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      😀 Thanks buddy! 🙂

  3. Devilzangel says:

    lollll :p a diff n refreshin take on d topic loll 😛 nice :D:p.

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      Thanks buddy. Glad u liked it 🙂

  4. gyanban says:

    Good work Tavish.

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      Thanks GB! 🙂

  5. Megz says:

    LOL :d khudke writers block pe likha tha kyaa 😛 😛

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      hehe sahi pehechana 😛

  6. Is it Old friend or old (aged) friend I would deny the later 😛 btw, Arise awake in the rebirth 😀

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      ha ha its the former buddy dont worry 😛
      I hope there isnt a confusion about the bald part 😉

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