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Drabble: Murder

drabble is an extremely short work of fiction of approximately one hundred words in length.

She hated it when someone disturbed her. Over the years she had learnt to remain calm. But today was just one those days. The little thing just wouldn’t stop bugging her. ‘That’s it, I’ve had enough of you!’ she screamed at the little creature. She picked up the nearest weapon she could find and whacked the poor little thing silencing the irritating noise forever.

‘Why the hell cant you do something when I ask you to!’ she screamed at the bewildered caretaker as he entered the room. ‘Didn’t I tell you yesterday, to replace the mosquito repellent?’

No. of words: 98

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Tavish is the administrator and founder of Sensible Bakwas. He is a software engineer by profession and a writer by passion. In case you want to get in touch with him, he is an email away at tavish.chadha@gmail.com. Hope you enjoy your time here. Do leave your feedback in the comment section here.

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18 Responses to "Drabble: Murder"

  1. Rajlakshmi says:

    ahh so its a mosquito :D
    nice drabble :D

  2. Tavish Chadha says:

    yeah hehe… thats right. Thanks! :D

  3. Rumya says:

    The MPF (Mosquito Protection Force) is on the lookout for a certain Mr. Tavish Chadha ;) LOL!! :D

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      hehehe i am seeking legal advice ;) :P

  4. DuDo says:

    haha good one… :D

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      :D Thanks buddy. Glad u liked it. :)

  5. Anuradha says:

    LOL.. mosquito bhi poor thing ho gya :P

    Niceee :D

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      hehe… ab us bechare mien bhi toh jaan hai na… hai ke nahi? :P

  6. Mosquitoes of the world unite and attack Tavish :P

    btw, in the line “till the irritating noise wasn’t silenced forever” is it wasn’t or was.

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      ha ha yeah they do… but I prevail!! heeheehahaha

      Thanks buddy. yeah I was skeptical about the grammar there… made some changes now… thanks!

  7. vikita jain says:

    mereko toh woh mosquito pe daya aa gayi… good one Tavish

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      hehe I can understand… thanks Vikita. :)

  8. Viyoma says:

    Oh God!! So much for a small mosquito!! Mosquitoes seem to encourage Drabble style of writing!!!

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      hehe really? I havent really read any other drabble centered around mosquitoes. Thanks for the comments Viyoma! :)

  9. Magali says:

    First time I’m reading a drabble… nice! :D

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      Hey thanks Magali! Seen u here after a long time! :)

  10. Deboshree says:

    Ha ha. What a perfect theme for a drabble. :D

    1. Tavish Chadha says:

      Thanks Deboshree! :)

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